लाखों होश गवांते होंगे, लाखो ही इतराते होंगे Poem by Abhishek Omprakash Mishra

लाखों होश गवांते होंगे, लाखो ही इतराते होंगे

लाखों होश गवांते होंगे, लाखो ही इतराते होंगे.
जाने कौन से लोग होगे, जो उनको भाते होंगे.
यार क्या हाल कहूँ मैं उनकी गर्म क़यामत बाहों का.
वो जो उनमे सिमटते होंगे, वो तो मर ही जाते होंगे.

Wednesday, November 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 16 November 2014

My dear Abhishek ji, the first line is outstanding but from then on the expression seems to have been pushed forward in a haste. Please try to balance the last three lines in tune with the first one. Enjoying your poetry. I extend my regards and best wishes to you, Sir.

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