My hand is almost
tired
in field
of writing
seems the case
of my running table
where invisible ink
is striking
as if
i am chasing the words
from space or
being chased
by unprinted letters
from down deep
i can't quit
i can't retreat
i can't hold my breath
yes
it has reason
i am obliged
to follow................
thy well be done
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I would like to translate this poem
Keep on writing. Your words are there within.....God give you that potential..use it.. utilize it......share it....