1 Out Of 10 Poem by Hardik Vaidya
1 Out Of 10
Rating: ★5.0
To you,
Yes you, your limited self.
Arrogance fumes,
From my volatile yet dormant volcano.
How dare you?
Yes you, don't you see?
My finger with shark teeth pointed at you,
Dogged, determined, and a killer.
Rate my poem 1 out of 10?
I shall make your sublime pay,
One day,
When you shiver in your grave,
Doubting me.
Thursday, September 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I saw a rating of 1 on a poem of mine. I respect the right to dissent and it emanates from the right to be a minority hand raised amongst a billion plus illiterates. No one writes me the poet off, not till I rise as a Phoenix from my pyre of infinity,
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4/25/2024 6:37:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow! Fantastic and volatile anger coming from within this poem, you've portrayed the lack of another's poetical finesse with great accuracy! Totally love how you described your revenge outright, yet subtly silent! Great combination of hurt and anger, couldn't agree with you more, Hardik. Really love your poetry, it's outstanding in my humble opinion, I always love reading it! Don't let it get you down, you have great innate talent that's stands on it's own. Thank you as always for sharing your feelings and heart. RoseAnn