Sunday, October 7, 2007

10/5/07 Comments

Rating: 5.0

it's 2: 35 and time stops
reflecting on yesterday
an unwilling tear drops
October 5th Rest In Peace Forever
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Chelsea Brink 02 January 2008

I have lost a loved one recently as well, however I have a hard time writing about him, I liked how you mentioned time in your poem-its tough to think that time continues on without the ones we love.

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Evaughn Gray 07 October 2007

once again i do understand the heartache of a lost loved one..i hope you get through this tough time of yours..~yours truly hazel

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