10 Years After These Lines Bleed Me Poem by Charles Lara

10 Years After These Lines Bleed Me

Rating: 5.0


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no words
no hellos
no goodbyes
nothing in my heart
if I would have
if I should have
if I could have slept
without a fight
but a dream of you
I wouldn't be here
right now trying to
understand the spaces
between faded lovers
now just far away friends...
if...and only if...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deanna More 15 May 2006

I enjoyed reading this scripted waterfall of fragmented thought, cascading down, in suggestive REGRETfulness of past 'could've-'s + should've-'s'. Very thought provoking! Clever ending ('if...and only if...') ...which spurs speculation in the reader's mind of possible 'maybe's' being considered. Well written! Deanna xx

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