1st In Series Poem by Samantha Bailey

1st In Series



I wrote this one about my personal feelings about something or someone and want to know what people think of it.

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Well it's been a few months now since we last spoke
And I'm just hoping that you liked what I wrote
I put a lot of thought, to what I wanted to say
Way back when on Valentine's Day

It used to be you chasin' after me, but now it looks like things have changed
I know that what we had was real love and feelings like those never go away
When I came back I thought everyone or everybody was different, they really were the same
I was the one who had grown up too much, I just didn't realize that I had

While I truly was on love with you before
When I moved away, I learned a whole lot more
I don't know if I wasn't in love, or just didn't know that I really was
But now I know I am and I wanna say

It used to be you chasin' after me but now it looks like things have changed
I know that what we had was real love and feelings like those never go away
When I came baxk I thought everyone or everybody was different, they really were the same
I was the one who had grown up too much, I just didn't realize that I had

Was too hard to think about it, when I was sittin' right next to you
We were playin' around and I think that you, gave me a clue
I have nothin' to do, so I start thinkin' of you and our Kindergarten class
When you're not with me, my heart breaks like a piece of glass

It used to be you chasin' after me, but now it looks like thinks have changed
I know that what we had was real love and feelings like those never go away
When I came back I thought everyone or everybody was different, they really were the same
I was the one who had grown up too much, I just didn't realize that I had

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well it's been a few months now since we last spoke And I'm just hoping that you liked what I wrote I put a lot of thought, to what I wanted to say Way back when on Valentine's Day ....well it is depiction of true feeling form inner cell. it is ralised but in reverse way.. so much dishearteningfor poet to grasp it... it happenes sometimes.. well written poem...10 read mine miss i miss u, mary tomarry, how are u and no separate ways...comment

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Siglinde Good 08 July 2009

This poem flows nicely. The rhyming works very well. I'd love to hear the tune! !

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