Tuesday, February 10, 2009

21 Questions Comments

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Verse 1

I just wanna chill and live my life,
Thats what youll be as my future wife.
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Andrew Sosa
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Greenwolfe 1962 17 February 2009

This is a quite interesting presentation of 21 questions. I assume there are 21, I didn't count them. The questions themselves are quite good ones. This leads me to believe that they are sincere. The rhymes are generally good ones. I have no large complaints in that area. I thought they gave the poem some rhythm as well. Overall, a fine solid poem. GW62

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