Monday, July 7, 2008

30 Year Old Line Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Baby, its cold out side
Why don't you stay and make a memory
with me
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Natasha Edwards
memory stay baby breathe
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Carl Harris 07 February 2009

I liked the wonderful rhythm of this quite appealing poem, Natasha, as well as how beautifully you phrased this poem. Expressive poems like this are not easy to get just right, but you succeeded extremely well in this fine write. Carl.

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Natasha Edwards

Natasha Edwards

Manchester
Natasha Edwards
Natasha Edwards
Manchester
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