Tuesday, February 9, 2010

39. In Celestial Rhythm Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was in deep sleep that winter night,
And darkness did freeze the world around;
Not a single star twinkled in the sky,
Not a single streak of light anywhere;
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PRAVEEN KUMAR English Songs
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 April 2010

Sir to me it is narrative poem rich in metaphor ambience and spilling vibes of emotions. Who she was? Indeed a poetic riddle poets’ love to keep inside …allow readers to ponder and find the answer…and your crafting is likewise… ‘Lay still and breathless, alas, in endless sleep... ‘gush of gosh… well it’s a part of poetry…thanks for sharing Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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