Sunday, April 10, 2005

4th Dimension Comments

Rating: 4.5

First there's the dot
Then alight another dot
Dot to dot makes a line
Line to line makes a plane
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Rozmanshah Abdullah
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Monica Engeler 10 April 2005

Little bit of science fiction here. I like the ending of the poem best. You brought the idea of the title out best there. Nice idea.

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