50/50 Poem by Dustin Dawin

50/50

Rating: 4.5


I gave you 100 percent of me
but you were cold to touch
I gave you 100 percent of me
in hindsight way too much
I gave you 100 percent of me
until there was nothing left
If I had given you 50
I'd have some for myself.

50/50
Wednesday, July 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When should you give your all?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 22 July 2017

I am afraid there is no provision for giving less than 100 per cent in true love or friendship. Otherwise, it is a nice poem. Thanks.

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Berlyn Estimada 19 July 2017

That's right, Love yourself first so that you can love others the same percent.. good poem

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Dustin Dawin 19 July 2017

Yes and thanks for your comments

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