7 Deadly Sins Poem by Jay hmph

Her eyes glow blue.
The purity fades,
As she relaxes against the man.
Her hair rolling down her back,
When the man raises her on top of him.
Panting rises,
As she moves swiftly,
Desire running through her veins.

Eyes shinning orange.
Self-control vanishes,
When she puts the fork in her mouth.
Stomach growling,
As she devours more,
Appetite growing,
Her voracity taking over.

Her eyes glimmering yellow.
Goodwill disappears,
She takes out the pistol.
Her black clothes are snug against her body,
As she holds open the bag.
The mask hiding,
The selfishness that rains over her.

Sparkling light blue eyes appear.
Assiduity dims,
As pain takes over.
Tears fall,
Showing her grief.
She takes the razor to her arms,
Misery clouding her face.


Eyes burn red.
Tolerance disappears,
Rage and fury strengthens.
Hands raised high,
Prepared to throw a fist.
Her hand connecting with the bag,
Gathering her resentment.

Green eyes come into view.
Sympathy decreases,
There is no going back.
He gets a promotion,
She watches with jealousy.
She craves what she can not have.

Eyes turn purple
Modesty disintegrates,
Her head held up high.
Egotism grows,
The satisfaction rises,
As she walks around,
Believing that she is the greatest.

Eyes go pale,
As her body lies motionless on the bed.
Heartbeat slows,
Breathing decreases.
The color drains form her face,
As her spirit fades.
Her soul now rests lower than the ground.

NOTE: I would like to thank whoever read this piece. This piece is very important to me. I would like to say that it is a work in progress. This is not the final piece. In case it was not obvious this is based on the seven deadly sins; Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Envy and Pride. There is supposed to be a second part where the main character goes to Hell and recieves her punishments. Each of the sins have their own punishments. I understand that this is controversal but I am not trying to harass or intimidate or anything of those who strongly believes in their Religion. I will gladly accept any recommendations or editing or suggestions to make this piece better. As I stated above this piece is very important and I would like it to be the very best possible. Thank You.