7 Deadly Sins (Pt 2) Poem by Jay hmph

NOTE: This is the second part of 7 Deadly Sins. The punishments have been taken from Dante’s 'Inferno' and the Greek’s beliefs. They both had punishments for most of these sins and I took either a combination of the punishments or I took the one I thought see fit. I stated in the first one that I know that this is a controversial topic but I am not trying to intimidate, harass, or offend anyone. This is a very important poem to me and I will take any comments, questions and/or suggestions to make this piece its very best.

Her passion determined her life
Chastity was thrown away
The blue eyes were the only visible body part
Now the punishment that presents itself
Is the fiery storm
That lies ahead

The intemperance influenced her life
Her constraint disintegrated
Her orange eyes glowed in the darkness
The penalty that lies ahead
Are the unappealing foods of toads and snakes
That is frozen within black snow

Her greediness made her who she was
Her benevolence no longer existed
Yellow eyes reflecting herself
Being put into a blistering cauldron
With weights weighing her down
Is what lies ahead

Her grief controlled her
Diligence is gone
Glowing light blue eyes is what’s left
Snakes slither in the shadows
Waiting for her to come
To receive what she deserves

Her rage made her who she was
The patience that she once had
No longer exists
Red eyes flash
Being whipped at
And dismembered alive
Is what she had to look forward to

Jealousy took over her
Sympathy and gentleness disappears
Her green eyes glow in the darkness
Freezing cold water
Waits for her to enter

Her egotism took all of her
Her modesty gone for all eternity
Purple eyes shine
As she realizes
That being tortured
Is what she is to face
To the very end