9/11 Tradegy Poem by Brittney Ramirez
9/11 Tradegy
Flying, Screaming, Yelling,
Just wishing they were'nt their,
Time flew by like nothing,
theres just a matter of time...
Before you loose the people you love,
They could be gone in a second,
Cries out to the world, to you, to him, to her,
To them, to us,
Husbands, brothers, cousins, dads,
Leave their lives behind them all,
Wives, sisters, aunts, daughters, moms,
All watch and try to forget that this is reality and they are watching,
a thousand people die before their eyes,
Our children need us to be there,
To not be scared but to be brave for them,
To have faith, and just hope that someone walks out alive,
Have faith and they will have faith within you.
i think that this poem is really good. that two hours you took to write this really payed off. good work.
Wow this took me only about two hours to write! Im young and fresh with ideas! Just thought about writing about this! My name is Brittney Ramirez and im 13 years of age and this is yet one of the best poems iv'e written EVER! So leave comments. Tell me what you think, Good, Bad?
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I would like to translate this poem
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i think this is a good poem..kind of hard to believe it was the product of two hours' work though lol..oh and it's tragedy, not tradegy...=)