90 Years Old Poem by Alexader Franco

90 Years Old



Your mind is set still
like a beautiful butterfly
on a red rose petle
and your thoughts
as frozen as a glaciar
when you think a thought
as smart as it may be
it drifts and melt away forever lost
and never to be..................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 03 September 2011

A truly interesting poem. Perhaps the 'be' at the beginning of line eight should do better at the end of line seven. Read mine - To An Aged Man - Adeline

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