Sunday, September 5, 2010

90 Years Old Comments

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Your mind is set still
like a beautiful butterfly
on a red rose petle
and your thoughts
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Alexader Franco
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Adeline Foster 03 September 2011

A truly interesting poem. Perhaps the 'be' at the beginning of line eight should do better at the end of line seven. Read mine - To An Aged Man - Adeline

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