Friday, June 10, 2011

A Ballad Of Sad Gnus, Page 1 Of 2 Comments

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Lu Gnu and Hugh Gnu were lovers,
Or at least, that’s what Louise thought,
But Hugh had a secret life of his own;
Nobody knew until he was caught.
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John Bliven Morin
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Adeline Foster 29 June 2011

John: I like, I like. And yet, how can I say this? Not only am I a poetry teacher, but throw in grammar as well. ‘They’ and ‘their’ are plural; therefore you must use were and never was. Of Course Lu is singular so you can keep those last ‘was’. Adeline

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