Friday, May 4, 2007

A Bleeding Rose And The Black Dragons Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through dark forests,
And dangerous swamps,
I came upon a rose.
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Nicolette Gonzalez
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ItalianxRainbowx Ninjaz 04 February 2010

I love this poem. You enthusiastically employ new and creative techniques in this poem. You apply the basics of good writing to develop a strong poem; the quality is apparent. Keep on writing great poems! ! ! ! ! ! ! :)

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purple moon 19 October 2007

I love this poem, such a wonderful imagination you really have, well done. We must all form a dragon hard skin in life to survive, but not so hard as to block the light of others completely. well done, such passion and conviction. A 10 from me, take care.

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Nicolette Gonzalez

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