A Breathtaking Fantasy Poem by Justine Keaton

A Breathtaking Fantasy

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My dearest, here I am planning
a trip down the lane to the sea,
in August as the sun is shining
and you're there to comfort me.
A breathtaking fantasy.

Over the fields we will ramble
picking fruit from God's bramble
soft fruit for jelly & blackberry pie,
oh happy day ~ sing I, sing I,
as my eyes point up to the sky.

We should be well-nourished
with His gift of the purest,
edible berries, and vitamin 'C'
giving us strength and vitality,
ever to be in love you see.

My dearest, here I am planning
a breathtaking trip to the sea,
down lover's lane so beguiling,
berries will grow wild and free.
A breathtaking fantasy.

Saturday, November 10, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: august,fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 November 2007

Dream on Justine! While your heart is light, the words will flow like wine from your pen. love, Allie xxxx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 November 2007

Awww Justine it brings to mind hot late summer days, made for love...10

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