Saturday, August 9, 2008

' A Briney Sea ' Comments

Rating: 2.7

I see the rolling waves undulating in the deep blue ocean,
I hear the gushing, the rushing and the turbulent motion;
While many of us are in the waters thrashing all about
Frighteningly and frantically, 'Save us! ' we shout.
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Carmela Patterson
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Hans Vr 01 April 2012

Dear Mel, I think this poem is very well written. A very nice description of a nightmare wth the big relief at the end. Even though I do not fully understand the title, I thoroughly enjoyed the poem

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Carmela Patterson

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