A Broken Heart And Shattered Dreams Comments

I gave this poem a solid 8 and I recommend it. This is one of the most interesting poems I have ever read. It is most sincere and is written from the heart of the writer. From that standpoint, I really consider this a 10. The poem is clear and very romantic. It also contains a musical quality which is critical to poetry. There are always a few technical things in rhythm and rhyme that I find in most cases and this is no exception. But I want to on clear on this. They don't hurt this poem. It reads like a 9 and sounds like a 10. GW62

Sweet poem. Derek, you really feel the heartache come through