Tuesday, February 1, 2005

A Bubble Away Comments

Rating: 3.8

why do you say the words that you say
tell me do i have to take another drink
i could die in one second
just take another blink
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amanda williams
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Rupa U 14 January 2009

Very expressive and emotive poem, but I feel that proper punctuation might have made it more effective.

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Anong All 25 May 2005

Very interesting poem.., it seems to give a lot.., even though.., it has quite the reflection... Not sure, yet the tone.., appears to be.., natural. Thanks for sharing.. With Respect, Jodilee

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