A Cataclysmic Difference Poem by Joey DeSantis

A Cataclysmic Difference

Rating: 5.0


Hold your breath.
Step towards the shadows.
Welcome to my atmosphere.

You're safe now.
No harm can be done.
We're not here to frighten you.

Loneliness is my only virtue.

Time stops and your free.
I can no longer hold you here.

Time begins and you feel the release.
Your emotions burst.
You're alive, you feel it.
You feel it in your lungs.
You feel it in your blood.
You feel it in your bones.
You feel it in your heart,
and you are free.

Breathe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 03 October 2008

Whoa Joe...I didn't know you had it in you...well i mean i did, but seriously...for your age...i think you might be better than me! Excellent

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Lynda Robson 18 July 2008

Good writing Joey, it must be a family thing, keep it up,10 Lynda x

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