Cabaline xxx

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A Closer Look - Poem by Cabaline xxx

I feel sorry for her, that girl
who looks at me,
with such sadness in her eyes

I feel sorry for her, that girl
who looks so desperate,
for a hug or a smile

I feel sorry for her, that girl
who sees the good in everyone
apart from herself

I feel sorry for her, that girl
who is so lost
and trying to reach for help

I feel sorry for her, that girl
who can solve others problems
but never her own

I feel so sorry for her, that girl
looking back at me,
from the mirror.


Comments about A Closer Look by Cabaline xxx

  • (2/14/2010 10:49:00 AM)


    Clever. Could be called 'self pity', but you did it with finesse. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2010



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