A Cruel Fate Poem by Jade in love

A Cruel Fate

Rating: 4.8


He screams
His pain.
Such lonleness
And hurts,
It's almost
Insane.

His heart is being
Ripped to shreds.
This feeling
It something
He cannot explain

His life is now ruined,
His world
Is dark,
As he holds he cold hand.

His tears fall
Like raindrops
Leaving wet spots
On her face.

He looks into
Her eyes once more
But they
Are mearly blank.

He can feel
Her body
Getting cold,
Like the emptiness
Of space:
As he holds her
In his arms,
Hers was such
A sad fate.

his life is now over,
And he wants
Only to die.
For he cannot live
Without her
By his side.

He remembers
Her last words.
They pierce
His very soul.

'I love you, and
I'm sorry,
That you
Never got to know.'

He'd been
SO foolish
Not to ask her...
Not even
On a date.
For now he'd never
Have the chance.

Oh, what a
Cruel, cruel
Fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sierra M 23 April 2006

Hey another good poem. Though it is sad, but when r ur peoms ever happy.Well its still good. i l y [[Dory]]

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Carlie Emerine 15 April 2006

Wow that is a good poem but long hehe! ! running out of ideas to say but bye! ! ! Love you! ! ! xoxoxo

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