A Difference In Me Poem by Dev Robinson

A Difference In Me

Rating: 4.5


I strive for a better life... a new meaning.... a new light
Because I no longer want to hide
I wear a face that I only want people to see
Here I stand drowning in my thoughts
Seeking for hopefulness....I don't want to cry
I don't want to continue living in a lie
Feeling lonely is the ultimate... The reality of it all
No one to lean on and no one to call
How does one get to such a dark place?
I feel trapped and this feeling I desparately want to erase
Seeking to be evasive to all my worries and troubles
So I try to hide them and it comes back on the double

Monday, November 16, 2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 16 November 2009

'A Difference in Me' is the beginning. That recognition that you are a writer. That feeling of being inadwquate you will adjust to. Knowing in your heart what it is you have chosen to do, brings you joy. But...yes, it is a one person journey. I really like your poem. As a writer, you've captured what it takes. And those feelings that go along with it. Nice, Dev. Good stuff.

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Dev Robinson

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Buffalo, NY
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