Sunday, July 18, 2010

A Different Life Comments

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sick and tired of the same old things,
love and sadness, and all that brings.
got no feeling, got no light in me.
this time i'll show you, i'll make you see.
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Marc Seifert
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Marc Seifert 18 July 2010

thankyou allen =) i'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem. i hope others get to enjoy it as much as you and i do :)

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Nice write Marc, i enjoyed the stanza content, you dont get carried away with unnecissary wording and phrasing, a concise and poetic piece about the things seen and unseen in life, nice poem.

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