A Dot Poem by Meena Iyer

A Dot

Rating: 5.0


A blinking dot,
Traverse,
through the white nothingness

A nudge here,
A dropp there
A life breathes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 December 2008

Life starts from spermatocyte, a dot out of millions dots.... A poem comrising dots and broken lines....

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Sarah Sisson 17 December 2008

Simple and deep....very good!

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Omar Ali Sabar 08 December 2008

SO SHort, So Sweet, So Powerful, So neat..10/10

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