A Dream Poem by Umbre MoonOkami

A Dream

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When I look into the ocean blue
I think of you,
I see your tousled black hair,
And your dreamy brown eyes
Looking at me,
I see in the moon
And it's smiling at us
And I see the stars
Dancing with delight
I try to focus on
One thing to make sure
My thudding heart stops pounding
I thought I was meant to be lonely
For no one to care for me
But here you are inside my dream,
And know I can see
Someone does care
Inside this dream I am asleep
But in reality I'm more than awake! !

Tuesday, February 7, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 April 2016

And I see the stars Dancing with delight I try to focus on One thing to make sure... but here you are inside my dream..... love, hope, joy. thank you for the wonderful poetic expressions in this poem. thank you again. tony

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Crimson Soul 21 August 2012

choppy images to form a whole, the beautiful image shown as a goal. It's Nice :)

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Pankajam K 07 February 2012

A sad note. Expressive. liked this.

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