jason mcgookin

Rookie - 7 Points (29 9 75 / scotland)

A Dream Of You - Poem by jason mcgookin

I dreamt of you last night
i held you in my arms so tight
not once did your face fade
not until love we made
we laid upon the bed bare
for once we didnt have a care
then realisation of heartfelt pain
when i woke up alone again
the time for us to be together
is when i close my eyes forever
for days and months have gone
yet i wake to another dawn
i take a walk down the road
the cemetery is now your humble abode
take care my love
ill see you soon


Comments about A Dream Of You by jason mcgookin

  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/27/2014 1:55:00 AM)

    A beautiful love poem and it is interested as much. (Report)Reply

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  • Shadow Girl (11/17/2011 8:04:00 PM)

    beautiful, melancholy but sweet..liked it a lot.
    -SG
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  • Sharon Herzog (2/19/2011 9:55:00 PM)

    I like the style on this one, again I am impressed with your work! (Report)Reply

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  • Sharon-Ann Dawson (6/11/2009 7:24:00 AM)

    I like your use of rhyme here, It works with your other words, instead of just a random word at the end that rhymes. Interesting topic. (Report)Reply

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  • Jacob Courtney (5/5/2009 11:40:00 PM)

    very beautiful. very heartfelt pain after losing the one you love. brave is the one left here after the one they love is gone. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 19, 2009


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