Susan Ash

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A Fantasy - Poem by Susan Ash

A man who has trust.
The patience to let
The encounter unfold,
Delight in every touch,
Follow where it leads.
Who uses all his senses -
Touch, smell, sight,
Hearing, taste,
To take and
Give back to me
What I offer to him.
A man who wants
To understand.


Comments about A Fantasy by Susan Ash

  • James B. Earley (5/8/2008 10:50:00 AM)

    Do not dwell on this my friend! Life unfolds in its own way...in its own time..it's funny that way. Thanks, and be well. (Report)Reply

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  • Poison 9901 (10/3/2007 6:42:00 PM)

    Awsome read, A very straight forward
    message contained in this one.
    Basicaly, pay attention, and reap the rewards
    Very nice
    'Keep on inking the Pages'
    Poison
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  • Jerry Hughes (5/11/2007 5:48:00 PM)

    Indeed Susan, contrary to scepticism such men do exist. Nice write... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 22, 2011


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