A Fantasy World Poem by AuQwon Turner

A Fantasy World

Rating: 5.0


A world who has birds that turn colors.
Where there aren't criminals, who has a god that walks on earth.
There's no devil, to push you around.
If you hurt yourself, your heal n' a second or two.
It's All In A Fantasy World.

Living like a delicate flower.
No Heart Breaks, No Push Aways.
Judgement Isn't Even A Word.
To Bring Back The Dead, & Having The Powers Of An White Angel.
Being clever as a dog, to rewind time, to complete your life line.
I'm A teen, & Yess I have a fantasy world..
Everyone's in it, they have a diff identity but the same looks, personality, the love to complete them.. Her & Him
It's All In A Fantasy World.

It's Like A World That You Don't Need Trees To Survive, Their There To Bring Peace To The Enviroment.
& To Keep The Excitement
You can always smell the flowers in the field.
Lay down & feel the flower swipe your arm back & forth.
Hear Them Talk To You, to give you the advice you need.
They'll promise to be your friend, to be there at all times.. Again to complete your life lines.
It's All In A Fantasy World.

I'm just a kid who thinks all this, who's the mind & the legs of this world.
Might be a fairy tail or a fake story, it's still a world..
It's a live it moves from place to place, locked in a case.
It's based on a a child's wishing list.
It takes strength & a brain to coperate with your body to make a fake story, a fantasy, and a fairy tale.
I have that, & I will not let dark worlds take over a blue sky, & rise with lies!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sj Holland 29 July 2013

Beautiful, inspiring, motivating. Such profound expressions and descriptions, as only a young person can do. I can't find the words to describe what I think about your poem. You have summed up just about all of the fears in the world today. At the same time you've written a verse of truth, about a place that really does exist, and in which I, and those who think and feel like I do, will be one day. That's why I believe in God, and I believe God. Thanks for sharing your feelings.

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