A Girl Poem by Trinidad Villafranca

A Girl

Rating: 4.8


Once there was a girl
Who simply had a dream For you to love her. But you loved me

She wanted you..You wanted me...or so you said.I said goodbye
Go with her I'll be fine
I said goodbye.I said Fair well.I'll be here
I'm alright. I'm still here.Your still there
We are still apart but untied in the heart.
I still love you I still care
I'm still here Your still there I'm done waiting
So farewell.I'm done trying
I'm done crying. I'm done..

Wednesday, January 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: farewell,goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daryl Cheng 15 August 2009

good work. this poem is heart-wrenching and really touching. shows how some times some people do not treasure what is before them. really nice poem.

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Aarif Ameen 03 May 2009

good work a girl 10+ love you take care

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Gi Galen 01 May 2009

Attractive … rhythmic, it would turn out a good song.../10

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