Thursday, July 1, 2010

A Grain Of Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little grain of sand upon the beach
Has a lesson in humility to teach
Considering the numbers vast and wide
So high so deep a grain hides inside
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Carmela Patterson
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Jean Dament 01 July 2010

I love how you wove your ideas of grains of sand with that of us humans so well in this lovely poem. The last line changed from sun to Son was brilliant & quite beautiful. Thanks for sharing. I gave it a 10. Spiritsong

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