Wednesday, April 6, 2011

A Hard Long Walk Comments

Rating: 4.5

Within valleys of dreams blows a mist of prosperity
But follies before life give shape to ghosts amidst shadows

A troubled mind stretches for a withering gasp of liberty
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Alan Kabanshi
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Sandhya Suri 09 April 2011

I am a stickler for imagery and movement in any form of poetry. This one was vividly inspirational!

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