Wednesday, March 12, 2008

A Heart Torn In Two Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your fingers are rushing through my hair
Your staring into my eyes
You sat me on you knee
Im trying not to cry
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Emma Hill
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Sophie Shaw 26 March 2008

hey emma. Lovely poem.

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Hollie S 24 March 2008

This is similar to the poem A Heart Torn In Two by sophie shaw What made you write this poem? ? ? ?

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Hannah Dean 12 March 2008

the words certainly describe the character's emotions. Beautiful poem - written and meant!

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