A Heart Unswaying Poem by Adam M Snow

A Heart Unswaying

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A heart unswaying on the water surface.
What burden is this; a love without a tragedy?
Such frail the human soul,
who are we to judge?
So easy are we to drown,
like a heart unswaying on the water surface,
so heavy that it sinks.

Monday, December 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter Stavropoulos 31 December 2013

If you were Gertrude Stein, and lived in the Paris of the 1930's, then I would say this is a great poem. Adam, this poem shows vision and sensitivity. Best of luck.

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