Monday, April 20, 2009

A Lesson In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can I talk of a lesson
I thought it was a blessing
Sent to me from heaven above
Oh how I wanted to be so much in love
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Ayana makonnen
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Carl Harris 20 April 2009

Well, I am sure you were not the first Finnish woman to lose her heart and soul to a rascal, Ayana, and you surely will not be the last. I liked the style of your fine poem which was written in a simple and direct style, easy for a reader to understand, and there wasn't a complaining in it like you see in so many other broken heart poems. As your poem says, you did indeed learn a lesson from that experience and like all things involving romance, it's what you learned from it that counts. Welcome to poem hunter, Ayana! Carl.

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