Tuesday, April 25, 2017

A Little Dream Comments

Rating: 3.7

When I lie on the bed
The sleep comes through air,
I am in dream but not in nightmare.
My mind on the way amid the beauty of nature,
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Sudip Chatterjee
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 June 2017

The fragrance of beauty gives me a happy pleasure Flower, birds, stram, .hill and the sounds, The dream breaks slowly and slowly Let us pray.. all points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully dear poet. Thank you very much. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 April 2017

A natural and lovely start. Thanks

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