Friday, November 20, 2009

A Love Story Comments

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well.. i don't know where i can start
it never happened too fast
when i remember it, it breaking my heart
1 year and half ago i was loser miss the life taste
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roxes kairi
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee tht was sweet! ! ! =)

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Danny H 20 November 2009

This is not quite a well formatted poem. but as long as the words speak for you. This story was ever so beautiful! it was very heart warming, and made my heart ache, im sorry, i hope you find someone that makes you feel like that again, even better, someone you can stay with and share love with. my favorite part was: whatever happened or whatever u say i will keep you in my heart everyday just look into your heart, you will find there's nothing there to hide take me as I am.. take my life i would give it all I would sacrifice don't tell me it's not worth fighting for i can't help it there's nothing I want more but it was nothing till u said u love some one else that is what made me bleed

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