Kaiza Abaincia

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A Love Story - Poem by Kaiza Abaincia

We held hands and tried
Our love is what we cried
People around we didn't mind
The pasts we left behind

A will burns in our eyes
Can defy even a million miles
But if we got no luck and dice
Can we twist the verdict of skies?

This maybe is the saddest fight
For regardless is our strength and might.
A need to rein in this plight
Coz everything is simply not right.

Like strings detached of kites
In a battle, we're wounded knights
Hoping to heal from a hack,
Finding our ways back.

If today we cannot be
Then tomorrow let us see.
This faith we have to deem
Now a fallacy, it seem.

The truth we have to keep
That warrior also submit
Raise white flag for defeat
Has moment to end the fleet

For who are we, my mate
If our supreme foe is fate?


Comments about A Love Story by Kaiza Abaincia

  • (7/10/2011 6:02:00 AM)


    first of all, this is my first ever comment on your poems (no including the mistakes a while ago) ... it was an unexpected error...kekeke.. malay ko bang sayo pala yon... nonetheless.., your poem was great...i liked it a lot...it realy reflects na kinikilig kah while writing the poem...


    p.s. this time ako na jud ni... keep on doing great things for you and the weekly silimmanian...
    sleep early para naman you can''t say nah.. '' i woke up at 2, remember? ''
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 13, 2011


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