when i looked into your eyes
thats when my life changed
it was like something from a fairytale
was slowly taking place
my life is slowly falling into place
like it should have done before
but now i've come to realize
that i needed you alot more
its like the sleeping beauty tale
one kiss was all i needed
to wake me from this nightmare
and everytime we are apart
your the one thing i miss
Since you commented on one of my poems, I feel it's nice to return the favour. And, on the bright side, who doesn't like to recieve a comment? This is beautiful. They say poetry needs to come from the heart. Maybe your poetry doesn't rhyme, you don't use special tenses and all that crazy stuff that others do. You don't write in haiku, that's because: You don't need to. Your poetry is pure, and for that, I congratulate you. 'Cause we lose sight of ourselves a lot, and if you continue to write, you'll find yourself easier. It becomes a way of life, trust me. Good luck in this relationship. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The love is expressed in its best manner. Great work. God bless you.