A Man Who I Use To Know Poem by nic Leisure

A Man Who I Use To Know

Rating: 4.8


Blood running down my arms
Taking every ounce of pain out of me
It feels like nothing of a mad man
Crying to die hoping to be killed by some one else
Who has no feelings?
Stopping at the raft of his own tears
Asking him what comes next
Feeling who he is
The tiring of madness, and a sadness man
Combined feeling soaside and crying the dark
With a gun to his dead
Saying I’m sorry what I have done
Dropping the gun to live another day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robin Miller 29 June 2010

wow nick this one here i like it cuz it has alot of thought and there is some sadness in it but other then that i like the end of it when he drooped the gun at the end

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L. Rigyra Nidro 19 June 2009

sad poem, I liked how he dropped the gun at the end. suicide is never the answer!

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pink strawberry 22 April 2009

a sad story, but it was really goood! keep it up my friend!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 April 2009

It is very sad to know a dying man. A lifetime rememberance.

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