A Modest Observation Poem by Michael Adeosun

A Modest Observation



Standing aloof - In limbo
In a setting - indefinable
A study of his swift seventy
coming at the heel
of a measureless expanse
of time.
His swift seventy
precedes an endless stretch
of ages.
And like a molecule
out of the ocean,
his seventy - insignificant.

Sunday, May 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,life and death,lifespan
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Rajnish Manga 21 May 2017

A wonderful philosophical presentation. In a wider perspective, things may not be that attractive but whatever an individual achieves in the given quota of time, energy and opportunity should also be acknowledged. Thanks for sharing a thought provoking poem.

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