Sunday, November 29, 2009

A Modicum Of Madness Comments

Rating: 5.0

The swirl of emptiness threatens me
with its cobweb opponents as they gather
near the tentacles of darkness
crouching in the corners of my mind.
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Carol Gall 06 December 2009

interesting fascinating int the world of madness 10

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Alison Cassidy 02 December 2009

'The madness of a demented mind trapped forever within a child of rage, ' Wow! this is fabulous stuff - as is the whole of this surrealist foray into the madness of night, perhaps? or dreaming, or the hallucinations that accompany sickness or anesthesia. Whatever the inspiration, the poem rings with some fabulous metaphors which creep and crawl ready to pounce onto the plasm screen of mind. Fascinating - the secrets of the creative imagination. Wonderful poem. Bravo. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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