The night is black, The snow is clean,
Pray for us lovers caught between.
My love, this land may do me harm.
So take my hand and keep me warm.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice little touch here Gary. It has an atmospheric sense about it. IMHO you need a pause between My love(,) and this. You should develop this poem further. It has promise.