A Note For My God Poem by Aldo Kraas

A Note For My God



A cold coke is wonderful on a hot day
French fries go so well with a hamburger
In the swimming pool is where I want to stay
During the hot days

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 22 June 2014

This short and simple write perfectly depicts a wonderful summer's day! Nicely done!

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Colleen Courtney 21 June 2014

This short but sweet write brings all the fun and enjoyment of summer days to the mind of the reader.

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Aldo Kraas

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Sao Paulo Brazil
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