Tuesday, October 23, 2007

A Parting Comments

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This Thing -
This Feeling -
That she gave to me,
Or I took …
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Iain Mackay
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Bob Blackwell 12 July 2008

Iain, you captured the parting very well, reminded me of a moment in the distant past, thank you for that. Bob

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Aine Ní Leidhin 24 October 2007

There's a sadness radiating from the lines of your poetry. Were you writing from personal experience? Remember Madonna's 'everyone must stand alone' but similarily everyone needs human contact based on mutual exchange. Kind regards

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