This Thing -
This Feeling -
That she gave to me,
Or I took …
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There's a sadness radiating from the lines of your poetry. Were you writing from personal experience? Remember Madonna's 'everyone must stand alone' but similarily everyone needs human contact based on mutual exchange. Kind regards
Iain, you captured the parting very well, reminded me of a moment in the distant past, thank you for that. Bob