Monday, May 18, 2009

A Promise To My Love Comments

Rating: 4.0

I believe that none could love you
quite as deeply as I do;

And yet I often fail to show
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Pritisha Sardesai
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Saadat Tahir 18 May 2009

hi pritisha very fine lines amid the caccophony of me and mine...you are all give...thats the pure love stashed in some museum of standards..long since forgotten liked ur lines...beautiful...its atenner cheers

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Roshni D'Souza 18 May 2009

I really liked this one! Good flow with a rhyme that did not seem forced! Thanks, roshni.

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