Saturday, February 9, 2008

A Reason To Be Comments

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The shores are gently or violently massaged by the sea
That in itself gives it purpose…. a reason to be
Tall trees with wide branches origins in a tiny seed
Just that gives it purpose…. a reason to be
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Arthor Journer
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R R 25 June 2008

A seemingly profound philosophic issue is elaborated clearly and vividly with various familiar things. Plus all lines are rhymed in different ways - excelent rhyming ability.

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